Horses, Cats and Nagging Wives

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By Rosemay50

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Source: Rosemary Gaston

Horses- Black Cats and Nagging Wives

“I’ll be away all day” said George as he picked up the morning newspaper.

“Oh and where might you be going?” asked Matilda placing a plate of bacon and eggs in front of him.

“To see Ted Wallace. He has a Percheron stallion he wants to sell.”

Spooning sugar into his coffee he gave her a determined glare, waiting for the argument he knew she would put up. True to form she slammed her fist on the table.

“And how are we going to pay for it? The mortgage payment is due and that won’t leave much spare”

“I’ll find the money, I’ll sort it out, Mattie now pour me another coffee, I want to be away by ten o’clock.”

Mattie poured his coffee and turned to the dishes in the sink, mumbling to herself as she clattered the plates. Looking up she stared across at the stables, hadn’t he enough horses already. They could barely afford the feed and upkeep as it was. They hadn’t even paid last months Farrier bill yet.

Source: Rosemary . Destiny, Connie &Jade
Source: Rosemary. Tasha, Tree & Rosie

She spent the rest of the day in the garden feeding the chickens. The sun was hot and she was tired. If it wasn’t for her growing vegetables and collecting the eggs they would be even worse off. She sighed placing a freshly cut cabbage in her basket beside the carrots. One of the horses whinnied as she walked past the stable on her way into the house. She strolled over to the stable half door, Staring right into the eyes of Rosie one of the Clydesdale mares, hate steaming from the glare of her grey green eyes.

“If we didn’t have to spend so much money keeping you in luxury we would have been able to afford that nice little cottage with roses around the front door.”

Rosie snorted, tossed her head and took a couple of steps back. Mattie continued into the house slamming the door behind her. She washed the cabbage then sat and had a cup of tea before preparing the evening meal.

“All sorted” said George picking up his knife and fork “He’s a good bloke is that Ted. Said I could make a down payment and then monthly to clear the remainder. Beautiful horse. Will go nicely with Destiny and Connie, and perhaps we’ll have a couple of foals next year.”

“What you don’t realize George is that the cost of their upkeep will far outweigh what ever you get from selling the foals. Especially when there is no grass in the paddocks because of the dry weather and we’re spending a fortune bringing in hay. And the vet’s bill arrived this morning with a reminder that it is two months overdue. We’ve been spending money on those damn horses for four years now, and what have we had back? Tell me that… go on tell me… not a single bloody cent”

“But it all takes time have patience woman” replied George.

That night George was woken by a commotion coming from the stables.

Grabbing his shot gun he raced to the stables to the sound of his horses thrashing and neighing. In the moonlight he saw a dark shape dart past him as he neared.

"What the devil was that!” he cursed to himself.

It took him until dawn to settle the lathered horses down. He tended to the nasty gash and bandaged Kimberly’s leg. Connie had some nasty scratches down her back.

“It’s Ok girl, there now, we’ll soon have you right” he said soothingly as he daubed a balm on the sores.

At breakfast he told Mattie what had happened. “I thought maybe it was someone trying to steal one of the horses but it must have been some wild animal. Didn’t you hear the commotion?”

Mattie said nothing. Just continued staring out of the window.

“I must get those courtyard lights repaired today”

“More damned expense.” Mattie thought.

The same thing happened that night. Again he was woken to the sounds of horses in panic. This time he saw it. A huge black cat. He’d never seen one so big.

“Get out you heathen. Leave my horses be” he screamed heaving a brick as it flew past him. He must have missed because there was no answering yelp from the animal.

After lunch he went into town to the local police station and reported what had occurred. “Must be some wild animal maybe a young panther or something escaped from a zoo.” George informed the police officer.

“No, there haven’t been any reports of escaped animals in this area, and no other sightings of a wild animal have been reported” Constable Peters told George. “If it happens again let me know and we’ll look into it and see if we can solve this mystery”

As George drove home a plan was formulating in his mind.

That night he decided to go to bed early and grab a few hours sleep ready for the vigil that he had planned for that night. But first he went to the stables to prepare everything in readiness. He spoke gently to each horse in turn, whispering soothing words as he stroked their manes and necks and patted their backs. “You’ll have a new friend tomorrow when I fetch him, his name is Gaston, and he won’t put up with that pesky animal… that’s for sure”

He stirred just past midnight. Mattie was gently snoring. He wouldn’t wake her. Didn’t want her turning on any lights and upsetting his plan. He hadn’t told her what he was planning. She would only kick up a fuss anyway and he’d had enough of her nagging about his precious horses. He dressed quietly and went downstairs trying to avoid the creaky one as he went. Once outside he took a deep breath and filled his lungs with the cool fresh air. All was quiet as he entered the stables. Only Connie gave a welcoming snort and nuzzled his shoulder. He settled himself on the hay bales, pitchfork ready by his side. He thought about Gaston and what lovely foals he would sire. His girls were beauties but Gaston was a prince. He had watched his girls as they had galloped in the paddocks enjoying their freedom that morning, what a beautiful sight they made and they seemed to have gotten over their scare of the previous two nights.

He had almost decided to give up his vigil an hour before dawn, thinking the brick the night before must have been warning enough to scare the animal away. Just then the horses started to shuffle and snort, he could feel their nervousness. There was just the moonlight for him to be able to see. He reached for the pitchfork and held it with a firm grip, holding his breath he waited. In a flash there it was the black shape; a cat lurched up onto Connie’s back.

Connie screamed and reared but the black shape clung on. He yelled but the animal wasn’t going to be chased off this time. It clung while Connie writhed and bucked. With all his might George lunged with the pitchfork, he felt the pull as it sunk into the flesh of the animal, Connie reared frothing at the mouth as the animal screeched. Then as the pitchfork was suddenly yanked out of his hand George fell backwards, rolling and ducking to avoid being kicked and trampled. He scrambled to his feet, sweat pouring from his brow.

He quickly turned to his beauties to calm them down with soothing words and gentle pats. The blooded pitchfork was laid on the floor but of the animal there was no sign. He turned on the lights and checked the girls out, the gashes on Connie’s back would need to be attended by the vet they were so deep. How he wished he had had the foresight to bring a bottle of whisky with him the night before. He could sure do with a drink right now.

It was nine thirty by the time he had settled the horses and gone back into the house to phone the vet. He wandered through to the kitchen ready for some breakfast. But there was no sign of Mattie and no breakfast cooking. It was most unusual for her to sleep in.

He went to the stairs and called “Mattie… Mattie it’s after nine… Mattie”

Getting no answer he made his way upstairs. “Mattie where are you?" he called. "The vet's coming soon and I have to go to Ted’s to pick up the stallion. Mattie!”

But Mattie was still asleep.

She looked pale. Was she ill?

He went over to the bed and gave her a shake. It was then he noticed the blood in her hair. Pulling down the covers he froze as he saw the pool of blood that oozed from three open wounds in her back.

© Rosemary Sadler Sept 2011

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writer20 profile image

writer20 Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Wow! this is a great story. You have a great imagination.

Maybe there's more coming?

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi writer20 I have boon without the internet for 24 hours so have a lot of catching up to do. I'll be popping over to read your new hubs soon.

Pleased you enjoyed this one.

There is another to come as soon as I get it typed up. Lol

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mckbirdbks Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

What a deliciously devious tale. I am glad I didn’t wait for the witching hour to read it.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Haha. I'm reading all the spooky hubs this morning, no way will I be reading when it's dark out there.

Pleased you enjoyed this one.

On my way to yours now.

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WillStarr Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

What a great Halloween story! I did not see that coming at all! Up and awesome.

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prasetio30 Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Nice story from you. You have done a great job here. Thanks for share with us. Vote up as always. ~prasetio

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi Will. I have heard that this really did happen in Yorkshire not far from where I lived. So it was a story waiting to be told.

Thank you for the vote.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi prasetio. O am pleased you enjoyed this story. I was happy to share and maybe scare a few people :-)

Thank you for your on-going support and the vote.

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Sunnie Day Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

OH Rosemary,

This was a chilling story to tell and so well written..It made my heart pound out of my chest..The thought of those poor horses and now Mattie..Thank you for sharing..My friend's horse was attacked by some wild cat last year and lost her dear horse..it can happen even here in Texas..Thank you for a great story..sad..but really good.

Sunnie

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you for dropping by Sunnie. Not sure why you feel sorry for Mattie though.

But yes it is sad when horses are attacked by wild animals. Luckily we don't have many here in New Zealand.

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Becky Katz Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Great story, we definitely need a scary button.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi Becky. What with 'Wow' buttons and 'Scary' buttons we will finish up with 2 rows of buttons. Lol

Pleased you liked it.

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epigramman 8 months ago

....many writers here have been writing dark stories as of late and this is surely one of the best - I think I've got some homework to do because this story and your writing is so very inspiring indeed ....bravo to you and yes I love that title, again.

lake erie time 1:23am ontario canada

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

You know Epi I couldn't think of a title, my partner took delight in coming up with this one. Lol

Yes there are some wonderful stories springing up and I'm still trying to catch up.

I'm pleased you liked the story and even more so that it has inspired you.

I look forward to reading yours.

Thank you for a much appreciated comment

NZ Time Saturday 5.40 pm

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ahorseback Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

Rosemay , You see , woman truely is wicked! LOL. you have a devious mind , seriously great story . Tell me you have these real beauties out in your paddocks! [Corrals here} he he , I love the pounding of the clydesdales as they pass across the fields!Awesome .

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Hyphenbird Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Rosemay, this is great, filled with love, hate, resentment and anger. All of those make wonderful stories and fill lives. Personally, I hope the vet is a woman and new romance blooms for George. I enjoyed your tale and if I ever marry I will NOT be a nagger.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

ahorseback. I totally agree with you the sound of those hooves is just awesome, sets the heart racing, they hate it when its wet though and try to stay away from the hillsides, their hooves act like ski's.

I wish they were in my paddocks. They were in OUR paddocks, they are now in my ex's paddocks. Shame.

But they are beauties aren't they... :-) the black to the right in the top photo was only 4 months old when I took this photo.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Aw Hyphen (smiles) Maybe I should do a romantic follow up just for you. Yes poor George deserves someone who loves horses aye.

Happy to hear you won't be a nagger Lol. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story.

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Seeker7 Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Oh Rosemay this is aweswome and so creepy!! I think shapeshifting always gives me the chills but it fascinates me as well. I loved this story it has everything a good horror should. Excellent + voted up awesome!

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Frank Atanacio Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

I really enjoyed this short.. I found myself drawn to to ur character George-- up and freakin awesome :)

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi Seeker nice to see you.

Haha it gave me the chills just writing it. Lol

Thank you for your awesome comments and for the vote.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Nice to see you Frank. Yes poor George he's gonna need a few friends.

Thank you for visiting and leaving an awesome comment and for the vote.

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50 Caliber Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

Roemary, well done a spooky tale to be told amidst the camp fire light, voted up, dusty

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thebluestar Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

Hi Rosemary, just when I was reading about all the familiar things my partner used to say to me about keeping horses, you made me re-coil in horror. OMG If anything got within running distance of my Blue it would have to go through me first. Horse owners are a law unto themselves. Horse's a hobby, a habit, absolutely not, they are a very expensive obsession. x

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makusr Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

Rosemay50,

Greetings from MAKUSR. Good story needs a sudden and unexpected ending. Your story has it. Good work. Keep it up. Voted up!

LOts of Love,

MAKUSR

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Cloverleaf Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

Hi Rosemay, thanks for sharing your lovely story, you have a great talent!

Keep on writin'

Cloverleaf.

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Hi Rosemay, terrific horror story, I loved it!

Voting up and I agree with becky we need a scary button!

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

MorningDusty. I' pleased you enjoyed the story.

Thank you for the vote up

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi thebluestar I couldn’t agree with you more, they are very expensive to keep and yes an obsession. Take care of your Blue.

Thank you for dropping by and leaving a comment

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you MAKUSR. I'm pleased you liked the story and the ending. Your comments are always appreciated.

Thank you for voting.

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Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Awww Mattie! I had a feeling it might be her but didn't want it to be :( Well told Rosemay!

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Good morning Cloverleaf. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story. Thank you for your lovely comment

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi Movie Master. There are all sorts of extra buttons we could do with. Lol

Happy that you liked it and thank you for the vote up.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi Sunshine625. Nice to have someone feel for Mattie. Shame really, such strange things happen.

Thank you for dropping by and leaving such a lovely comment.

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

OMG, This is great, what a surprise ending. This is the kind of story that leaves my mouth gaping and wanting more.....

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

It obviously had the desired affet on you Ruby.(smiles wickedly) Thanks for your awesome comment

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Fennelseed Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

Poor dear Mattie, she was the practical one here and George such a dreamer when it came to his horses. Great story, such a sad ending.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi Fennel. I'm pleased someone else had sympathy for Mattie.And yes he was a dreamer. I wonder what he'll do now woth nobody to keep him in check.

Thak you for dropping by and for your comment

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Vinaya Ghimire Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Characters appear with flesh and bones, that's what I liked in the story. Storytelling is very engaging. Nice work.

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RNMSN Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

really cool story!! and you say the inspiration was a story that it had occurred in your land?

"there is more to heaven and earth, Horatio..." very scary!!

and its still 2 hours away from dawn here!!! :)

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you Vinaya for dropping by and giving your appreciated opinion. I don't think I could write about monsters, weir wolves or aliens. Lol

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi RNMSN. I would say neither of us did too bad for our first attempts. Lol.

Yes a rumour in England that a farmer pitchforked a cat on the horses back and then found his wife dead with wounds. I don't know how true it was, but all it needed was a bit of detail to turninto into a good story.

2 hours to midnight here... stay safe

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Diana Lee Level 5 Commenter 8 months ago

You are very talented. Voted up.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi Di9ane nice to see you

Thank you for dropping by and voting

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Sueswan Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Hi Rosemay

Wow! You are a great story teller.

Tingles are running up and down my spine.

Voted up,up and away!

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi Sue. No doubt you'd prefer another sort of tingle running up and down your spine... :-)

I'm happy that you liked it and thank you for your vote

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LABrashear Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

Great story! I loved the twist. Voted up for sure!

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

LABrashear Nice to meet you. I am pleased you enjoyed my story.

Thank you for dropping by and the vote is much appreciated

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Truckstop Sally Level 5 Commenter 8 months ago

Yikes! I should have seen the conflict coming. At the first sign of a black cat, I should have run! I'm not much good for scary stories.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Aw Sally I should have put 'SCARY' in the title. I must pop over, I missed the last one of Lorna Peele, I need to catch up.

Thank you for being brave enough to stick around to comment... :-)

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Teresa Coppens Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

Excellent writing. The story flowed so well and naturally. What an excellent ending. Very eerie story. Late now here in Canada but I can't wait to read more. Bravo!

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you Teresa, your comments and opinion are very much appreciated. This is the first fiction I have written so I have been very pleased to read the comments on this story. So maybe I will write another.

Thank you have a good night.

jami l. pereira 8 months ago

OH dang , a tragic ending , i didnt see that coming , now im feeling bad for mattie , a wonderful story , it kept me at the edge of my seat the whole way , thanks for the read!:) I voted up ! ,awesome! and interesting ! , I loved it!:)

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Hi Jami. Yes poor old Mattie all she wanted was a little cottage with roses around the door.

Thank you for reading and for the votes

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Eiddwen 8 months ago

You are indeed a brilliant story teller.

Congratualtions on this gem and here's to many more to share on here..

Take care

Eiddwen.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you Eiddwen thats a real compliment as this is my first. Thank you

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Camping with Kids 8 months ago

Hood job. I job, I was riveted to the end, but I must confess, I saw where you were going. It was the "evil glare" LOL

GA

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you Camping. I did wonder about leaving that bit out. Thank you for giving your opinion.

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thelyricwriter Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago

Wow, you are a true writer! Fantastic work Rosemay. You should be somewhere printing books girl. You have an amazing gift and they way the story is laid out, structure wise, it truly is great. I had it down and at the end, ?????? I didn't see that coming. Your gifted. Honestly. I will have to make sure to read your other work as I am sure it will be good. Keep it up.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 7 months ago

thelyricwriter Wow thank you for such a wonderful compliment. This is the first short story I have ever written so I am overwhelmed at your comments.

Thank you so much for the encouragement, it makes me want to write more. Thank you

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PADDYBOY60 Level 5 Commenter 7 months ago

Awesome story. Spooky ending, but it was great.

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 7 months ago

Thank you Paddy. I'm pleased you enjoyed it

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TToombs08 Level 5 Commenter 6 months ago

I loved this. I was NOT expecting the ending. Bravo!!!

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Rosemay50 Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you TToombs08for dropping by

I'm pleased you enjoyed the story

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